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Karis Berrey's avatar

Hullo Emma!

I just wanted to say that, even though I'm not a "Kansas Kid," I really enjoyed your poem!

This rings very true to me because, although I do not have a truck, I do have a very very old minivan and it is constantly breaking down.

Although it is often very frustrating to drive that hunk of metal around, I also have so many incredible memories that revolve around or within my old Honda Odyssey.

I think that when I "upgrade" or when my car finally dies, I will mourn my current van more than most would guess!

Shivan Nikolai's avatar

Hello Emma!

This is my first time commenting. Your poem is lovely - I feel very much like the truck and the man trying to fix it. I am only 27, yet I have been through so much. My favourite part is:

"for though all things must grow old and all things must die

there are some things we fight for as the years pass us by

for the dreams and the memories that bring us hope, love, and luck ..."

I can't possibly convey how meaningful those lines are to me. I will certainly be keeping it in mind and hopefully returning to it in the future.

Thank you for your wonderful writing.

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